a Shadow in the Rain
Sitting in a corner
Unnoticed by everyone,
No one knows you're there
That you're staring at them.
You shrink further down
Until you resemble the floor,
Pushed out,
Left out,
Clutching your hands in despair.
Eyes alight with anguish,
Burning into everyone's backs,
Mouth set in a line
Inside you cry out loud.
They're all laughing and joking
While you're cold and alone,
Left out in the pouring rain
Staring through the window
At the party, warm and inviting,
But no one's invited you.
No one's forgotten you
Because you have to be in someone's mind
To be remembered
Or not.
You were never known,
You were never seen
You could be right in front of their eyes
But still no one would see you.
Turning around you walk slowly away,
No one glances back,
No one stops or pauses,
No one notices your disappearing figure,
Now just a shadow
In the rain.
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You just don't know it, but
Someone is thinking of you. Missing you, wanting to talk to you, wanting your affection.
Thank you for reading
and one day I hope you're right...♥
I don't know...
How personal this poem was, but I can say this, your poem got the message across. I read this twice and both times got lost in it, you know like daydreaming, I felt like I was there, Sad but a good write-Lee
Thank you
That really means a lot, sometimes you just get lonely, too lonely to explain...it's not about a certain thing exactly, just feelings I sometimes get-thanks ♥
Dear Jewel just know that
Dear Jewel just know that you are seen, and that I personally will never forget you and your beautiful spirit.
Your words, but most importantly, you, cast a shadow in my brain, and in my heart of friendship.
Be well dear one.
Cristo :)
Cristo, thank you
No matter how down I feel, I always feel warmer when I read something by you-really, you are too kind ♥