Only a Dream
It's silent,
there's no noise,
nothing's been destroyed...
there's a stillness to the air,
birds are singing
the sun's shining
the day's just beginning
and no one's crying,
the ground's soft
beneath my feet,
the people I thought were dead
were just asleep,
the blood soaked fields
were just scarlet poppies,
the explosions and firing
were just the conkers
falling off the trees,
there's no weapons,
no killing,
no fighting,
it must have just been
some animals biting....
everything so so green
I can't remember it ever looking so lovely
where have I been...?
I open my eyes
and hear the familiar roar
see the familiar scene
I've seen so many times before.
I close them again and sigh uncontrollably....
it was only a dream.
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nice
i like this one.. :)
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Thank you-I'm glad you do ♥
Jewel, this was really
Jewel, this was really good!
Better that our dreams are the nightmares, than vice a versa, yes.
You are very talented my friend!
Cristo :)
Thank you
I thought of it after talking to my uncle (he used to be a soldier) and it just made me think...or write, thinking makes me get a headache! And I'm not really talented, talent is supposed to be a gift...but I definitely think you've had yours since you were born! ♥
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no offense..but talent isn't what was gifted i think
but talent is something from the result of what you're trying too much to get inside what you write and can flow with the rhythms (in this case), you're called talented.
So there's no one talented or gifted, but instead of a hard work make them looks talented.
None taken ☺
I know what you mean, there's no such thing as talent, sometimes when you love something so much it comes across in when you do it...that's what I love about when I write, I can bring myself away from what's in my head and just focus on what's in front of me-thank you expressless ♥