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Now It Dies

Posted November 6th, 2008 by JewelPhoenix

Collapsing,
falling,
ruining,
forever,
it goes,
it tumbles,
it crashes,
it ceases,
it cries,
nothing can resurrect it
as now
it falls,
as now
it dies.

A Leaf

On November 6th, 2008 rrje4019 says:

Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com

A Leaf falling from a tree or a petal from a flower, as it settles on a river which flows over the falls yes ?

Yes and no

On November 7th, 2008 JewelPhoenix says:

I did think of this as I was watching leaves fall, and though it can be related to that there's something else it symbolises too-I'm glad you picked that up, thank you for reading ♥

Beautiful

On November 7th, 2008 WriterGirl324 says:

Beautiful. I like the idea behind it, the idea of something falling and dying out. It reminds me of the way I used to be, so driven toward my betterment, but now I'm just this undriven...uncaring person. Anyways, nice work as always, Jewel.

Thank you

On November 8th, 2008 JewelPhoenix says:

For commenting, I appreciate your thoughts always :) I'm sure you're still that person underneath, maybe she just needs finding again...♥

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