Now It Dies
Collapsing,
falling,
ruining,
forever,
it goes,
it tumbles,
it crashes,
it ceases,
it cries,
nothing can resurrect it
as now
it falls,
as now
it dies.
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A Leaf
Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com
A Leaf falling from a tree or a petal from a flower, as it settles on a river which flows over the falls yes ?
Yes and no
I did think of this as I was watching leaves fall, and though it can be related to that there's something else it symbolises too-I'm glad you picked that up, thank you for reading ♥
Beautiful
Beautiful. I like the idea behind it, the idea of something falling and dying out. It reminds me of the way I used to be, so driven toward my betterment, but now I'm just this undriven...uncaring person. Anyways, nice work as always, Jewel.
Thank you
For commenting, I appreciate your thoughts always :) I'm sure you're still that person underneath, maybe she just needs finding again...♥