Like you
A cold breeze tingling your skin
The same as when you speak,
Grass bending over in bunches
Pillows for one to sleep,
Sky that blue
That special, in-between blue,
You feel it's made
Especially for you.
With the same hand that has picked
All of the dewdrops it could find
And then put them in the sky,
Not a single one left behind.
A thumb which has traced a crescent
Up above in clear chalk dust,
Starker than the stars themselves
Done clearly, no need to rush.
It's all so amazing,
It's all so true,
It's all so characteristically like
You.
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Dear Jewell, I'm so glad I
Dear Jewell, I'm so glad I have some time this morning to catch up on some reading and reviewing. You have always been one of my favorites, as this piece so wonderfully reinforces why. It's son nice to see such a caring and gentle soul as yours come through in your words.
You are naturally gifted my friend.
How lucky for us!
Cristo :)
Cristo ☺
I'm so glad you have time, as for being one of your favourites I couldn't be, my thoughts and feelings are just that, they're nothing special :) but I'm so pleased you like this one, thank you Cristo :) ♥
Jewell, that just makes you
Jewell, that just makes you more endearing, not knowing how truly special you are.
You will always be one of my favorites (and I only have a few) whether you understand that or not.
You're the sparkle in my night.
Cristo :)
OK Cristo! ☺
Though I think more of my cats and kittens as endearing (and cute and wonderful and adorable!) rather than myself, but I won't argue with you, in whichever way I give you light I'm so glad :D ♥
Beautiful Jewel, just like you!
Nature made just for you! I know what you mean too. I think God really does make certain things in nature, for just us.
"Sky that blue
That special, in-between blue,
You feel it's made
Especially for you."
Beautiful jewel, just like you.
Linda
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Thank you Linda
Everything you see is so special, we should take time to look and treasure more often-thank you so much for your kinds words :) ♥
just like you
last line, last stanza is not flowing. The rest of the poem is great! The imagery and flow is good, I like this one It's a keeper!~Ron
*"whenever in doubt, dream...inspiration will happen when you least expect it.." r/k 2-2009
http://Ron_Kinard.tripod.com/
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That's great, I didn't see it like that, I'll have a little fiddle later :) Thank you Ron, for your read and comment! :D ♥
Haven't been on in awhile
Haven't been on in awhile but today I just feel like reading. And I happened to pick a great piece. Very beautiful, Jewel. <3
Cassie.
Cassie
Thank you so much for commenting, coming from such a beautiful writer yourself that's lovely of you to say :) thank you ♥