For you

flowers lain
For you,
the day, a year,
For you,
as I wash the stone
don't feel alone
because I'm here
For you.

Short

But filled with sadness,
Dave

I know

It's like a numb ache, but thank you Dave ♥

I visited today

I brought a coin
for her
I cleaned the stone
for her
thru sun and rain
for her
I was not alone
with her

Strange I visited my Mom's grave today and came home to read this. Thank you for writing and sharing Jewel

ron

"things are not always what they seem to be cause seams are in all things"

Thank you

It was probably just a coincidence, but thank you...and your insert poem is beautiful ♥

:)

Your very welcome Jewel, I sometimes respond with a poem. Only very special people get a poem :)

ron

"things are not always what they seem to be cause seams are in all things"

I read it once through
and smiled behind my tears,
I read it again
and my sadness all but disappeared,
though there's still an ache
there are some people who can make
you feel better, despite the pain ♥

Jewel

You are my diamond in the ruff :)
ron

"things are not always what they seem to be cause seams are in all things"

Ron

and you're my footprints in the snow...♥

Thank you

It was probably just a coincidence, but thank you...and your insert poem is beautiful ♥

Perfect

I have a stone I go to one day a year so that this person, too, does not feel alone. My god, Jewel, this poem is so beautiful. I read yesterday but didn't comment. I think it's so perfectly written, that even the comma placements are perfect. Thank you.
---Toti

Thank you...I'm sure your person isn't alone

It's funny, I didn't even have to think about what I wanted to write, I just put it together and haven't wanted to go back and change anything, yet you say it's perfect...and it's always enough for people to read, I don't expect comments though they're lovely...thanks Toti ♥

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