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Firebird

Posted August 16th, 2008 by JewelPhoenix

Golden red, piercing
Eyes, orange feathers uncurl
As the firebird flies.

love it

On August 16th, 2008 raskin says:

great visuals in so few words. raskin

Thank you

On August 30th, 2008 JewelPhoenix says:

Thanks raskin, this was my first go at writing a haiku, so for someone to like it is great! Jewel

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