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Dreams

Posted August 23rd, 2008 by JewelPhoenix

Silhouetted against the sky
I sit on the grass and wonder
Why life is not as simple as
It seems, why can’t life be just like
Dreams?

Dreams

On August 24th, 2008 David Gibbs says:

What a beautiful thought! If you ever find a way of making life a dream, can you let me in on the secret please?
I like this piece, short, simple and makes you dream yourself of things you would change. Cleverly done,
Dave

Dave

On August 24th, 2008 JewelPhoenix says:

If I ever found that out, I'd shout it from the rooftops! Thank you for your comment, I really appreciate it, Jewel

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