Beyond The Horizon
I forget what's wrong with me
I smile and breathe
Because you understand
And treat me normally,
You let me live,
You know what I need.
Stories of walking hand in hand,
Running barefoot across the sand,
Tales of absorbing the sight
Of a field of red, red poppies
Basking in their crimson light,
You let my mind drift
Like pebbles beneath water,
Or like mermaids
Unable to hear their murmur...
You whisper
About oars cutting through the sea
A rowing boat bobbing along
All these images I see.
Even if I can't do anything
I can still imagine
Because I know
That one day I might still win.
You know I make small improvements
Day by day,
You actually talk to me
You actually listen
And allow me to have my say.
You let me think ahead
That one day I'll be adventuring,
That one day I'll be telling the stores to you,
Not that by eighteen I'll be dead
No way,
I'll be travelling the world instead.
You don't give me false hope,
Because I stay realistic,
I know it won't happen like magic,
I just need to be patient
And let it happen, bit by bit.
One day, I'll be telling the tales,
Of all the places I've been,
One day, I'll see what's beyond the horizon,
That is ultimately my dream.
You believe in me
You say I've just got to try,
You say that I can do it,
Never give up,
Never give in,
Even if you have to cry.
You know I'll keep on fighting
You say miracles can happen,
I know it's all down to you
Every day in what I do,
And that I'll have done everything, not if
But when,
I believe in myself
One day I'll be just like everyone else
Walking,
Talking,
Singing,
Living,
That I know is true.
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hopeful
I'm big on hope. I thought you wrote your feelings very well and I think anyone who has gone through self doubt can relate. Good poem. Thanks for sharing. raskin
Thank you
I really appreciate your comment raskin, I wrote this mainly for someone important in my life, but I tried to write it so that almost anyone can understand and relate to it-thank you ♥
I love this poem
Positive is rare, and it's good. Thank you! --Toti
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Thank you for that, positive is the new hope! ♥
Beautiful and Thanks. =]
This was beautiful and it made me smile. Thanks for the many comments I have received from you on my poems. They were greatly appreciated. Grand write. =]
Cassie.
Thank you
I'm glad it made you smile, it reminds me of a saying my mum used to say-if you see someone without a smile, give them yours-which is what you've given to me! It's my pleasure to comment on your poems, I love reading them and seeing the versatility in them all, so you're welcome ♥
poem...
wow...that really goes to the heart...good job....
....brezzy....
Thank you
For reading and commenting, for someone to say a poem is heartfelt is one of the best things you can say ♥
This to me comes off as a
This to me comes off as a very courageous write Jewel, my grandma used to say 10% of life is the crap that happens to us and the other 90 is how we react to it.
Deep and poetic my friend..........Z
Your grandma's very wise
and very truthful, if more people tried to see the best in a bad situation (even if that situation is impossibly bad) we might all get something more out of life-thank you for commenting, I'm glad you did ♥
I think Jewel
With your wise words of comfort that you do believe in yourself deep down, and your words are for you, maybe your inner voice telling you, to listen to it. I think you are Brilliant for your age and a very clever young lady, you will go far with your words.keep writing hugs from Willow
Thank you so much
I can't thank you enough for your kind words, I try to believe in myself always because hardly anyone else does (reputation is a hard thing to shake off) though there are times when I lapse and think I can't do anything, in those times I want to remember that I can do it, so I wrote this partly for myself, like you said-it's the first time someone's called me a lady, and a clever one at that(!) you're a real friend to me Willow ♥
I believe in you
Jewel from what you have written so far.you will go a long way,and yes you are very clever,you have a beautiful way with words, hugs from Willow
I'll remember that when I think no one does
Thank you again, your words always lift me Willow ♥