Believe

Get lost,
Go away,
I don't need you
To stay,
No more do I have to suffer your constant lies...

No more tears will I shed,
Alone, unloved in bed,
This is a new beginning for me as much as you...

No more pain
To disguise,
No more feelings
To compromise,
I have finally seen things in their true light...

No more will I need
To make myself bleed
Just to get me through another day...

No more hurt
Will you cause me,
No more anguish
Will you draw from me,
It's finally time to move on...

This is the end
Of the road,
No more am I
In autopilot mode,
I have finally seen things through my own eyes...

It's over,
Just leave,
And maybe one day,
I'll have enough faith left in me
To believe.

that makes two of us

One not so professional poet to another.I enjoyed this and could feel the pain there.

Gloria

Thank you Gloria

Ditto! I was feeling a lot of pain when I wrote this, but writing about it helped me move on...thank you for your comment, Jewel

Well Vented

This is a good piece in two ways. It's written well and the hurt you feel is clearly felt running through the whole piece. Secondly I bet you feel loads better for getting it down on paper! A great write,
Dave

Thank you Dave

Thanks so much, like I said I was feeling hurt and a lot of pain when I wrote it, but I'm pleased that the experience I wished I hadn't gone through has enabled me to write something that people enjoy...and yes, I do feel tons better for writing it down! Jewel

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