Telescopes
I took a look inside,
I see myself wealthy,
My body healthy,
I live in a mansion,
My own corporation,
I took a look inside,
I see my beautiful wife,
Two babies in my life,
I’m loved by a loyal lady,
Two babies calling me daddy,
I stop looking inside,
All my visions suddenly die,
Back to reality,
No love around me,
When I look into telescopes,
I visualize dreams and hopes…
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I like but would change the
I like but would change the visualize to see
much stronger image and statement
Warren Peace
thanks
thanks for your coment... and thanks for taking your time to read my poem. i would change it to a stronger statement, but i just cant think of any right now... thanks again.