Ode to Dad
Without a word it crushed him;
down he went and died.
A lifetime of growing
gone in the blink of an eye.
It is taken but not returned;
like you are a part, not a whole.
One day the sense will come;
until then all I can do is cry.
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Nice job!
This is a good poem. Very sad, but keep it up!
~Goth_Scene_Kid~
Thankyou for the positive
Thankyou for the positive comment. I will read your poems with interest.
Twice!
Twice!