States of emotion
Cruel,
so selfishly cruel
is to punish with love’s shucks,
when the other lips – mute.
…….Duel,
mutilation, removal…
gravitation jumps in flux,
no one comes with a loot.
…………Fuel,
hearts’ efficiency fuel
sparkles eyes with explosion,
and will burn out your mind.
……………….Dual,
emotion is dual –
once it’s set for implosion,
never leaves you behind.
June 25 2007
Copyright ©2007 Iouri Lazirko
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great structure
A very visual pen, hard hitting as well!~Ron
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Thank you, Ron.
This is my baby steps in English poetry, so I’m experimenting with words and try to make a sense.
With appreciation,
Iouri :)
Ubi vita, ibi poesis!