Reluctance and Faith

I won’t walk these corridors –
webbed neuronic grids.
They are holding locks on doors,
thinnish walls on lids.

This clandestine, selfish mode
(God is calling "sins")
thrives and occupies abode
of sincere chagrins.

I could save myself from gaps
of obscure upshots,
but my voice outcries and straps,
forming bloody clots.

My keen lips are loosing grip
on the fibs to spell,
Truth is waiting to be stripped
of dark secrets’ shell.

Came to Temple – found Path
to the Savior’s Gates.
Prayers ooze on mounting wrath,
push pure dreams to bate.

Mercy’s dewing on the face,
veins are chilled by rave.
Such a frigid, fragile trace –
walking to the grave.

27 June 2007

Copyright ©2007 Iouri Lazirko

wow...

I love how you worded this!
it's raw and original....keep it up.
peace

and let the peace be with you as well :)

Thank you,
Repenter85 (sorry dont' know your name)
I`m glad you liked it.
Peace is where the heart wants to be :)
Ubi vita, ibi poesis!

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