Going blind

Since withered by the conciseness, a chin
still trembles touched by mordant powers
which tend to pulverize a dainty grin
and paint a smirk and knock to cower...

Revived convulsions in the heart upraise,
awed by its own determination.
A sense is made; the sense outlives the taste
of sight’s demise. Precipitations

are counting feared droplets of dismays.
While taking crushing course, a body
absorbs the truth like punches on a face
till countenance becomes a wady.

The pain is dull. While swapping blush with pale,
the silence grows, commits a treason.
A letter seen transcribed and felt in Braille,
as wadies... reaching rainy season.

16 May 2007

Copyright ©2007 Iouri Lazirko

Going blind

Very deep and moving..
Thank you for your comment on my poem.
venkat

Thank you, Venkat!

Your poetry blooms with feelings of higher love and peacefulness.
Shukriya :)

Ubi vita, ibi poesis!

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