HEARTS' MAGIC
Theres' mystery, magic,
Permeating, the air
Lonely hearts, escape
From doubt, and despair
Familiar, those feelings
These paths, perhaps, crossed
Time spent, in hurts' healing
Search for love, a dream, lost
One smile, sweet word,
Gaze, into kind, gentle, eyes
Lifetime, of waiting
No disguise, nor those lies
Eyes, open
Heart listens, to knock on the door
Chance, seldom taken
Could, fate, be ignored?
Two hearts, empty
Awakened, ready to explore
Emotions, run deep
Could this be real, or much more?
NJO
06/13/09
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Fabulous ...
Nance, great words in an even better flow, with excellent punctuation to accentuate the feeling. Thanks for sharing :)
ron
"It ain't what they call you, it's what you answer to." W.C. Fields
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FABULOUS
dreamweaver519 (Nance)
Thanks Ron for the kind words and feedback
Leaps of faith don't come easily for me
Love is definitely elusive......if you don't
take a chance, you could give up on ones' fate.
Nance :)
love this nance
How sweet! I say go for it!!
It sounds like its real to me! I love the way you wrote this. Coming directly from your heart!
Nice job!
Linda
Love This Nance
dreamweaver519 (Nance)
Thanks Linda, for taking the time to read.
Glad you enjoyed it. I'm glad there is Poetry to express my inner thoughts, and feelings through written word. Nance :)