Only This

Flooding heavy
Deepened thought
Drowning deadly
Own projecting brought
Breathe the words
Feelings write
Once endured
Revealed in light
Only now
Never before
Pen somehow
Speak forgoes
Only this
A soul
May find
Some of peace
In heart and mind

Copyright © 2008 Victor Duna. All rights reserved

Good work

I liked this piece, but I have to say I find the spaces between each line extremely distracting and unnecessary.

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