Invisible

As others have

As others can

Why then

Not this man

Family love and more

Others enjoy

I alone unspoken for

Am I not just as they

Why then such

A heavy price I pay

In debt to love

And all for life

Why go on

Just want to die...

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copyright 2008 v duna

Poignant!

A powerful write, and nice use of rhythm here. I was drawn to this one straight away, as it reflects the human condition.

Debs x

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