all in the alliteration
a solitary state. a soul sister by my side. always.
satin dreams and sweaty thoughts. salty skin. a strong bite.
sensual mask. sensitive eyes through to my heart.
a song hoping for completion. lost in the lyrics.
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alliteration, not too much. Utilized great sounds in a variety of ways. raskin
Thank you, Raskin. :) Yes, I
Thank you, Raskin. :) Yes, I agree with you in regard to over-use of alliteration. In this piece, I hadn't even realised I was doing it until I was almost complete and thought, "Hey I must have liked the sound of the letters and the feel of them!". Unconscious alliteration I do very much enjoy.
Again, thanks for reading and commenting.
~ Suzy.