Empty Bottle, Empty Bed a.k.a The Country Song
Would you come and soothe me in the morning,
when I'm dying on the floor just like a dog?
Would you come and see me in the morning, baby,
so all this pain I had would feel alright?
Could you put your lips onto my lips,
then maybe we could kiss until the afternoon?
My throbbing head would feel much better, pretty baby,
and I'd thank you forever more.
Would you walk out on me like the others,
leaving me dreaming about what's between your thighs?
Would you walk out on me like the others, baby,
or would you stay and compromise?
You could put your head down on my pillow,
then I would swear that you were my princess.
And if I swore that you were my princess, baby,
Then I would say this whiskey bottle's done.
Then I would say this whiskey bottle's done.
H.Math circa 2007
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Wow, this is nice
Just like a song.
Your words are luring...and hungry...i like this alot!
You write beautifully! Welcome!
Linda
Thanks
for the kind comment Linda. Indeed it is a song, with chords!! Glad you liked it I nearly never posted this. Look forward to reading your own work.
Oh and for the record I was hungry!
Regards,
H.Math
country
it's easier to get a new bottle of whiskey than it is to get laid.
yes neo...
and the bottle of whiskey doesn't expect flowers or kindness afterward either! They make such a nice date!
Word
Sure is.
H.Math
quite good...
this defintely has the feel of a country song. Very nice!
Take care,
Mark
Cheers,
am gonna go get one of those dates that don't want flowers. I'm thirsty!
Welcome to the showcase
Way back in my day
We had these women booze poems
and this much I can say
I don't know what I loved more
sucken on a long neck
or sucken on a whore
Great poem Kris, looking forward to read more from you
"It ain't what they call you, it's what you answer to." W.C. Fields
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Your greeting is most kind,
thanks for the comment, rather more spectacular than my poem, look forward to checking out your work. Fairly undecided with the whole neck/whore issue. The battle in my mind rages (lol) !!!!!
cheers,
kris