Chairman of the Poured

Tepid vessel I drank from whence steam rose
Better to be enjoyed hot than so cold.
Ginger, cloves in char, lost, spiced hearts froze,
Spent, stewing, lukewarm, yet, able to scold.
Spite may not have told me to warm the pot,
It left me taught, straining through fingers; slip
Beholding beauty, keen to be forgot
Hot kettle pot no handle; hard to grip.
Yet, grateful I was to brew among rays,
Camomile shot like smack into my veins.
I drank from that hit stained cup for days,
Cooling heated surprise; against my grains.
Oh spoon flicked bag, with reason to shout
Cast out from tar, ‘to a fountain of doubt.

H.Math

sonnets

It's rare I actually find a contemporary sonnet I like; most written these days are just sooooo annoying. But damn, this is how it should be done. Love the metaphor (perhaps allegory), meter, and external and internal rhyming. As I an avid tea drinker myself, I much appreciated the imagery, too. Great stuff, Kris. Many thanks for sharing. Say hi to Malcolm for me.

Tea is perhaps

my favourite beverage, besides a nice glass of port. Thanks for the comment. I tried my best to keep it in iambic pentameter and am glad you liked my stab at sonneteering. Malcom says 'tell neo hi and that Bill Cosby impersonations make me horny also'. Thanks neo and take cares.

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