False Alarm
Unforgivable is what I said.
When I thought I was dying,
you went to sleep, you went to bed.
Assuming that it was all in my head,
I remember now,
unforgivable is what I said.
I did the research, I read and I read.
I tried to show you, but
you went to sleep, you went to bed.
I’m trying to forgive you and look ahead
but the trust is gone now, and
unforgivable is what I said
Seeking compassion, I was instead
met with condescendence, then
you went to sleep, you went to bed.
What if you woke and I was dead?
Now don’t you see why,
unforgivable is what I said?
You went to sleep, you went to bed.
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moving
That was moving, Geo. Strong feeling and well-rhymed and constructed.
I love you-
r feedback ;-) Really, I look forward to it Neo, thanks for reading. How are things down south? Is Ezra still in that fridge of yours?? If you see Sharon Olds, be sure to send her my way.
things are good
thanks for asking. nah, ezra is no longer in my refrigerator. but now i've got the ghost of a kangaroo living in my apartment with me. he's been helping me keep the midgets who live in the palm trees outside from stealing my other kidney.
Brilliant
I read I read... Brilliant... Loved this! .... Did I read it wrong was it I read I read or I read I read... LOL! Brilliant Brilliant Brilliant! Forgive me for loving this!
XO
Ray AKA Yobarney
I'll try and forgive you..
read is the read like red not read, haha.. whoever came up with this silly English language anyway??! They must have drank.. or is it drunk?? lol. Thanks for reading Ray!
~Geo