Drunken Fantasy
I wish you were here for a drunk fuck
You know the kind
The kind where we get down and dirty
and you take me from behind
The kind where we get kinky
and pull out all the stops
The kind with ropes and toys
and we worry about the cops
I wish you snuck up on me
while I was writing this
grabbed the pen away from me
and forced yourself a kiss
Commanding me to swallow deep
grabbing fistfuls of my hair
caring nothing of the truths we seek
but only of that vaginal tear
I wish you knew me better
and I wish you knew of my desire
I longed to be physically wanted
not simply of pleasure that can be hired
I know what I seek is bliss
and I should be happy with what I've got
But all I can think about is what I miss
and all the things I worry about is all that I'm not.
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Good Piece
It's a good piece, at one time or another I think we all feel like that.
well done.
Warlock
Thank you
for the considerate response. I was surprised by your response actually... the thought that someone actually takes the time to look at my words.. then consider that they might actually mean something more than what they appear to be on the service.. that feeling is great.
Thank you so much for thinking.
no doubt about it
we've all been there. great writing geo. i like this one. makes you really think.
Linda
I love...
this website. I love that we have the freedom of expression and the instant availability to satisfy our needs with the internet. I love that there are people out there like you... that fill my longing soul will the validation that it desires. Thank you.. for whatever reason that caused you to read my poem... thank you. I'm very very appreciative. It's nice to know that someone pays attention.
Many a Drunken fantasy
I wonder how many other minds your drunken fantasy runs around...very intense a provocative read..Paula G
That..
is a very good question. Thank you for posing it. It's nice to think that I am not the only one that feels this way at this moment.... or for that matter.. at any moment. It seems as if, we as a people are always struggling to maintain some kind of image, when in reality.. there are many more people that feel the same exact way.
Thank you.
Damn, GeoWench, that was
Damn, GeoWench, that was righteous. I love the erotic nature of the beginning and then the thoughtful twist at the end. Great write. Peace, NSF
WOW! Attention grabber. Lots
WOW! Attention grabber.
Lots of emotion went into writing this.
Agree with others, we have all been there at one time or another
Hope you can heal and find peace within.
INSYNC
GREATTTT
Great Poem,
I dont know why but I love been hit or slapped espessialy by a girl :L I just buzz off it so much lol
LOL
Well... I guess we all get something different out of poetry. You know. I think, if you really don't know why you feel that way.. then maybe you should consider that there is a 'control' issue somewhere in the mix. I know there is with me. Thanks for reading!
I Like this
I like this a lot... It's a great write ... there is a fine line between wanting the physical wild monkey sex and just wanting to be desired... And then there are the insecurities that we all have... we compare ourselves to the younger more beautiful, smarter, funnier ect... and we are hard on ourselves... That's why we need possitive reinforcement in the form of being desired... Great peice of work!
Ray AKA Yobarney
Thanks Ray
Yeah.. I kind of surprised myself with where I ended up on this one. Thanks for the feedback ;-)
I read your comment again..
and your very insightful. It's very impressive how you were able to read between lines that I hadn't even noticed yet. Thanks for reading.
I read your comment again..
and your very insightful. It's very impressive how you were able to read between lines that I hadn't even noticed yet. Thanks for reading.
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Geo
I haven't talked to you in a while, but would love it if you could come by and read this or something else on my online radio show called "Daily Happy Hour." It's on M-F, 2PM your time. Please drop by if you can, my friend.
http://www.blogtalkradio.com/10KPoets