Smoking, Writing, Wanting, Waiting
Rolling out on my way to set it alight
Embers burning- trailing off... curling
Smoke blurring lines... lips grasping tight
Tension easing- inhaling, exhaling- swirling
Immunizing myself against worldly anxiety
Nice Dreams as i let your vapors soak into me
Gentle release as i begin to let go
Immediately relaxed as i’m lost in the flow
Now intensely attentive, but to nothing specific
Parsing sparsely- distracted, distant- the red-eye
Infected, irritated, imitating before- now global, prolific
Easy, but fleeting- feeling found momentarily- high
Cruising along, letting time pass right on by
Elevated- for tonight- far, far above the fray
Sure i can feel you but i’m not sure what to say
Forging on- baked halfway- you’re nowhere around
Opening, opened- open- finally seeing my way down
Realistically speaking i never really had a choice
Every memory of you- your smile, eyes & voice
Vying for you patiently- pouring my heart- praying
Expecting nothing but still dreaming of everything
Running in circles- desperately writing, wanting & waiting
** see more of my poetry on my blog "Nothing Definite: Spontaneous, Combustible, Poetry" at http://gcool06.blogspot.com/ - thanks for reading (and writing)! **
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I really enjoyed this!!
Hey, I really enjoyed reading this one!! I found it to be a very creative piece. I really like the overall wording scheme here, and the way you came to rhyme it. Also, it came to display a very impressive vocabulary, and flowed really nice in tempo as I read it out loud. Keep up the fine work, and I look forward to reading more of your material!!
thanks...
for reading and for the feedback. i'm glad you enjoyed it. :)