Anonymous Alcoholic
A room, a ring, people to care
A thought, a dream, something to share
A way to stay sober, a short way up
A way out, over- away from stuck
Inspired by some of the simplest things
A word, a wake-up, when someone else sings
Awful moments now rolling out
Antiquated approaches, full of doubt
A friend to hear can aid the bout
Against what you cannot do alone
Ample assistance when between the stone
And a very hard place to be.
Acting- I can feel it- on me
* To S.S.H. :) thank you.
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I dig the...
I dig the upfront nature of this...the honesty. I also like the overall message that it seems to send...that if we can all bond together in these times of trouble and express our fidelities with each other, we can take a step closer to solving our problems. I'm not sure if you write out of experience, or just write, but I did enjoy this, and look forward to your next. Thanks for posting. J.P. (Rex)
I like the lift of this, the
I like the lift of this, the hope in it. Lovely! Thanks for posting, my friend.
from experience...
you should notice a theme. :) as always, your feedback is appreciated.
Friend Of Bill and Dr.Bob
Hey George,
Very good poem. I have been trying to get my stuff into the Grapevine. Have you ever trued to contact them and ask if they would print poetry? Give it a try. Maybe if other poets start submitting to them they will change their 1940's way.
Ron
Sayville West
Suffolk County
New York
"It ain't what they call you, it's what you answer to." W.C. Fields
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