Addressed to No One
words on paper, written neatly
addressed to no one, sweetly
wanting words, wishing for love
futile, considering the above
words on paper, penned discretely
signed and folded, sealed completely
forever bound, these words to no one
maybe found when all's said and done
words on paper, lighter now
letting go, lost emotions found
still alone, still at a loss
but looking out at any cost
words on paper, set to rhyme
words on paper, wasted time
addressed to no one, she is gone
and now i don't know where i belong.
** see more of my poetry on my blog "Nothing Definite: Spontaneous, Combustible, Poetry" at http://gcool06.blogspot.com/ - thanks for reading (and writing)! **
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i really liked this poem,
it was sweet in a bitter sort of way...
keep up the good writes!
it's been years...
since i had a relationship that wasn't long distance. so it's still a bit rough to write the 'Love' poems... that's the reason this one probably seems different- it acknowledges i don't feel comfortable being alone, i suppose... thanks for reading... :)
This has
a different tone compared to your other poems.
I appreciate the tender feel and your courage in expressing this loneliness.
I like it! Very well constructed!
Eric
Whimsical...
I found this to be quite whimsical...daringly clever, confirming well the overall emotions in which I feel you attempted to convey. Also, the poem is constructed well, and it flows nicely throughout each given stanza. (There is an element of tempo here, giving it an interesting appeal of a contemporary read.) Hip quality stuff, man. J.P. (Rex)
Well Written
I really enjoyed this...the rhyme is excellent and unforced. I agree with Rex...this and much of your writing has a rythmic tempo...maybe like pop/ rap lyrics. You have a unique style. :)
This is sweet and moving..it helps sometimes even if your words don't reach those you are writing for...just to get it out...to put it on paper and be able to recognize how you feel. It helps give closure. Well written.
Jill