A Sunday In Savannah
Death the clouded mystery
And life the naked now...
What may we do?
Shall we kiss,our time together immortal in the moment,
Our sins, were there sins, dust in the cosmos
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The air is in my hair; peacefully,
Gently your fingers tease the strands
And I remember... your face, not yet forgotten,
Your kiss, not lost in stirring leaves of autumn.
These memories... each is treasured
All are interconnect and crisscrossing
All are what I am.... then and now
so
Come softly through the night,
My lover, my friend, my hope, my desire...
Your robes falling open, your breath my memory.
Let's savor this moment, and make it immortal... our now!
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As is This
This piece has a mysterious passion to it that most writers have seemed to have lost. a hundred thumbs up and not a single nail down...
For all it's worth...
twilight zone
it's like an in between dream/reality kind of write, intriguing say the least. It does have an aura of mystery around it, shrouded by shadows edging into the light. I like this one, good job!
*"whenever in doubt, dream...inspiration will happen when you least expect it.." r/k 2-2009
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Thanks!
Maybe I write one good poem a year... like taking pictures, you shoot tons looking for the one good one. Thanks for reading and commenting, charly
a mind is...
better than a camera, you don't have to wait for the right shot, just let it happen! I think you probably have more in you, like at least, one a day? Finding a quiet time and place (mine is early morning before anyone else is awake) and sit down and let your fingers do the rest. If I can't do my "usual" time, I'll go sit in the grass or walk down to the river and take a pad and paper, something always stimulates thought and I put it down, not worrying what it is and then make something of it later... It's not supposed to be a chore, have fun with it!~Ron
*"whenever in doubt, dream...inspiration will happen when you least expect it.." r/k 2-2009
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Yes! it is fun
Hi, Ron, I do the same, in the morning or at night. I live in a camper now and it can be close. We have 3 dogs and 4 cats. In the morning if I don't feed the cats right away, they walk around on the table reminding me that they are ready to eat and blocking the computer screen; sometimes even pushing keys. Soon though we will be returning to our home in Michigan where there is lots of room to find a place to write. thanks for your comments, charly
I can relate...
3 dogs, 3 cats, 2 birds and a wabbit...2 of the cats and the wabbie is outside thank God! time and lack of space can cramp the style! be safe on the road, read ya later!
*"whenever in doubt, dream...inspiration will happen when you least expect it.." r/k 2-2009
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