Me and You

Pretty pictures drawn with words
Beautiful music,that never before has been heard
A rainbow of color,for moods of every hue
Tender moments,sweet embraces
Me and you
A thought lingers like
the jet stream in the sky
Tenderness in a look
The sound of your voice
makes my heart rejoice
Seeing you stroll up my drive
Anticipating the hello kiss
Watching you stop to pick a flower
The love shown in that action
Emotion tender,sweet pure
Me and you

Beautifully written...

And very romantic! I especially liked these particulir lines..." Seeing you stroll up my drive/Anticipating the hello kiss/Watching you stop to pick a flower..."
That was very sweet! If you don't mind my saying so.

Missed you

I've been missing your comments tj.Thank you for this one.

Gloria

Gloria

It is so nice to see you writing a sweet and tender poem instead issuing ass kickings to all the bozos that have tried to make a run on you. Way to go my friend, this was a pleasure.

Pete

Geez

two in a row, Pete ,my friend,this and "Love again" not a single ass kicking in either..

Gloria

Gloria

Did you get my definition of a tanka that I sent to you?

No

Pete just checked my e mails no I didn't get it
Gloria

No

Pete just checked my e mails no I didn't get it
Gloria

Gloria

Definition: Tanka is a Japanese poetry type of five lines, the first and third composed of five syllables and the rest of seven. Tanka is the oldest type of poetry in Japan.

ty

Pete thank you
Gloria

ah!

Lovely, a work of art...Now I see the reference to my paper palette. Yes, they marry very well! Cheers

Paul

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