Independence
Independence,a goal for which to strive
A dependence on one self,to survive
To open your world,to handle your life
Not to hide from,but deal with the striff
Have independence,but not try to rule
Give your heart to love,but not be a fool
Find new places to travel,it is your trip
Drink from the cup of life,take a sip
Don't fear to do,for the end you might cry
Independence can handle ,deal with why
I say independence,I hear you moan
Independence doesn't mean being alone
Depend becomes need,independence lost
The price to high,I won't pay the cost
Independence a way to live,how you feel
More in how you cope,to you what is real
Don't loose yourself,while trying to please
Dreams get lost in wind,but live in breeze
Independence lives and is content
No need to ask,where dependence went
I enjoy my life,independence and all
For one so short,I am standing tall
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Speechless
Im truly speechles. My jaw dropped after i read your brilliant work of art. I loved it! It was soo true and inspiring and...lol,i can't think of a word good enough to describe it. just wow. Keep it up! =]
Peace Out
A.Jay Harmony
my new poetry buddy
Thank you for taking time to read and comment. Think it is kewl that I can reach young people with my writting.I am an old hippie that still enjoys writting.Looking forward to reading some of your writes.
Gloria
I see you
Gloria,
This is a very self revealing piece, and through it's fine lines I can see the real you. I loved this poem, and all the more I applaud you for your Free Spirit
Thanks,
Dolan
Hey Dolan
thank you for the kind and welcome comment.laffin to live my life style you have to have independence and attitude and as a free spirit I just might have a little to much of both.
Gloria
Yes!!!
Freespirit, my friend, this was absolutely awesome. You are just too cool for words.
WOW
OMG such wonderful words I have recieved with this one,now I can include yours,thanks.
Gloria
I really
really, reaaaaaaaaally like this poem. I've read it several times for several days and have sent it to my friends. Your beautiful words have somehow echoed how I've felt, yet, I have just never managed to put those feelings into words before. Thanks to you.. I can just read them. It's like having that third person looking in on the situation... know what I mean? Thanks so much for sharing your perspective!
Yeah! I Understand
This site is awesome.somedays I think I should feel guilty calling myself a poet after reading some of the great writes in here.some I wish I had writen.They have wrote my thoughts.Thank you for reading and you welcome comment.
Gloria