I Think I Pissed Him Off
Wow he said ,I've had it,I'm leaving,
deal with it.
Yikes, this is a whole new game,
how do you handle that shit
I'm not really sure
Just what it was he had
but it sure in hell sounds
Like it must of been bad
Holy hell what was that he said
as he walked out the door
Maybe I didn't hear him right
but it sounded much like whore
I answered with something sweet
and perhaps a little snappy
somehow I got the idea
that didn't make him happy
When I pick my laughing
ass up from the floor
I'll walk across the room
And shut that door
Isn't this where I should shed a tear
be filled with remorse and grief
Damn if I feel anything at all
The feeling would be relief
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I'm Laughing!
'When I pick my laughing ass up from the floor!' Thats got to be the funniest line iv'e heard for a long time! Good one Gloria.
DEbs
gotta admit, i'm with debs,
gotta admit, i'm with debs, funny for sure
To you both
I think a little bit of the devil was sitting on my right shoulder when I wrote this.It was fun.Thank you both for your comments.
Gloria
ha ha nice one
ha ha nice one
Yes, Gloria
I have a feeling that you did indeed piss him off (good for you!) but I'm sure he had it coming.
So pick your laughing ass up off that floor and write us another great poem! LOL
Your Friend,
TJ
laughing ass and all
TJ my friend, do you get the idea at times I just might piss off the good old boys just for fun lol but then think some love to see me loose my temper 'Lost Temper" another poem.I guess that kind of shows both sides huh?
Gloria
I think you love to piss men off!
And love being in control. Sneaking in under the radar to drop a bomb or 2 in their laps, just for laughs? Yeah...I think that's you.
You know how to push a man's buttons, don't you? And when they're wrapped...they're tightly wrapped, aren't they?
Good for you! Show 'em whose boss, baby, and don't ever let a man give you hell...'cause you're the kinda hell no man can ever stand up to. He's going to loose everytime.
I like your strength!
Maybe Pay Back
That strength was built one heartbreak at a time
That independence was built by one need after another not being met
That kick ass attitude came when one to many used the word love when offering another four letter word
I've met some men that were all I'd hope they could be but as it shows in my writes, I meet my share of the ones that deserve my in your face, kick ass attitude.
Gloria
I like your kick ass attitude
Being single is a bitch! I've met my share of loosers as well, so I know what it's like to meet someone you think is honest and maybe true...then they turn around and screw you just to have a laugh.
I too have known heartache and what it feels like to place your trust - and your heart - in someone's hands. Only to have them decieve you. Not a very good feeling.
Believe me, I've known the pain!
Your strong spirit, your independence...and your kick ass attitude will carry you along!
Stay strong, my friend. I have no doubt you will!