Dear God
Dear God,just thought I'd sit down to write
Thought I'd have a word with you,if I might
Guess you know I haven't always done right
But God,I have always kept you in sight
I've not been as bad, as some people think
For afew years there,I sure enjoyed a drink
My family wished i was the missing link
Dear God,you just didn't allow me to sink
I've always lived my life,as if I were dieing
Right out front,no reason for lieing
Some times I caused tears or I was crying
I left them shaking their heads and sighing
Well Dear God,as I move near your door
I guess there isn't alot I am sorry for
Some things I wish I hadn't done,some more
More good then bad,if you keep score
Dear God,just wanted to thank you,for life
For making me strong to handle striff
For year of being a mother and wife
For letting me live here in heaven,in this life
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I Like This Gloria
I guess we have all had this conversation at some time or another, certainly know I have!
Thanks for posting, enjoyed the read,
Dave
THANKS
Dave thank you for taking the time to read and comment.I do believe most of us have had this kind of a talk with God.Living alone in the woods in my piece of heaven seems to bring it all closer.Thanks again.........
Gloria
Nice souful write, Gloria...Makes you think
So often we take what we have for granted.
But let's thank God for all we have, and all we've gained!
Hugs City Boy
Thank you for commenting on my write.Hope all is well with you,my friend.
Gloria
All is well!
Hope all is well with you too.
Yeah life is good
If I were any better they would pass a law against me.
Gloria
Same here, Gloria
Met a very nice lady a couple weeks ago that I met at work. We work opposit shifts, but happen to be off on the same days this week. I asked her out this morning, and she said yes!
We exchanged numbers and I'm looking forward to talking to her this evening.
Wish me luck!
I am so glad things are going well for you. I love your blog. Your poetry is awesome!!!
Don't have as much time as I used to to read or comment because of my hectic schedual with work, but love it when I do have the time to read.
Freespirit, my dear friend....you are amazing! I wanna be just like you...well, someday, when I grow up!
Take care, my friend.
Yours Truely, TJ
You're Going to Grow Up
TJ now why would you want to go do something like that.I don't think us old hippies ever grow up.I am not sure if I am eccentric or just plain nuts.after I deside that I'll work on desiding if my other writing is erotic or porn.Laffin
Gloria