Missing You
Before the sun comes out every morning
I hear a sound of a woman’s mourning
There in her bed longing for someone
Remembering the memories of her man
Today, is just the same as yesterday
Living a life alone and away
All tomorrows are the same as today
Reminiscing the joy and love of May
Mementoes of his love always be cherished
A heart wanting his sweet caress
There in her room a woman still weeping
A piece of her is missing.
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I feel
the honesty and the emotions here...
Very well done!
Eric
thank you
It's my first time to post a poem. Thank you so much!!!
THANKS
Thanks a lot Eric!!!
foxyfeliz
hi
ur great
hi Ryusuke
Thank you for the comment..
Love it!
Hi Foxyfeliz!...
Just like you Im new in this website, your poem caught my attention.
I love your poem...
I can see the sincerity of your love..
Keep it up!
Make more poems, sure will keep tracking you.
Lianlim
Hi Lianlim
Thank you...looking forward to read your poems..
foxyfeliz
~Tender~
Foxyfeliz,
Your poem is very tender and touching. It is simple, yet profound. It moves and holds interest. It is heartfelt and authentic. It is a very beautiful expression of love lost. A wonderful piece of poetic artistry.
Warm regards,
Kathy Paysen
Hi Kathy Paysen
Thanks for the wonderful comment. I really appreciate it!!!
Foxyfeliz