Creeping fear
The darkness takes me into its hallows, I fall deeper into its swallows, I am afraid of what I might find, here lies the fears of which I have resiened, for the dark brings with it the real me, the person most people don't get to see, of course some good could come from this horrid greeting, of which I wish I could try retreating, I am afraid of what I might find out, I'd have to look at myself throughtout, I would have to see who I really am, if I'm bad my soul be damn, could I live through that pain, or would I pray just to go insain, for now I cower to the light, trying to end this gruesome night, and so i fear the dark because I fear my true self the one from which I cannot hide, the one by which I cannot abide
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strung out
the lack of separation really adds appeal to this write, making it literally creep along, well done!~Ron
*"whenever in doubt, dream...inspiration will happen when you least expect it.." r/k 2-2009
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mind reader
Thank you that was my exact goal! I wasn't even going to add the comas ,but then I thought about it and decided that I wanted the flow of little separation but still there needed to be a place were the thought not ended but flowed into the next thought.
hit it on the head
you nailed it then, serving your purpose and then some. Very creative! I'd like to see what you'd do with "slithering"...LOL
*"whenever in doubt, dream...inspiration will happen when you least expect it.." r/k 2-2009
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Wandering in the Dark
I have always had an irrational fear of the dark as my mom called it. I blamed it on all the scary movies my grandpa let me whatch when I was five. I said its not that I'm afraid of the dark I'm afraid of what I might find in the dark. One day I finally thougth what would I find in the dark. I finally came up with th answer, I would find myself and every flaw. If you want you can check out my site, http://free-spirit.weebly.com/
no doubt
When I was a wee child (starting at 3) i loved horror movies, the darkness wasn't so bad, it was the monsters in the closet and under the bed I worried about...LOL Now, I'm the baddest thing I find in the darkness, especially when I forget where the mirror is and accidentally run into it.. I like the black screen on your site, I'll visit it again later, thanks for the link
*"whenever in doubt, dream...inspiration will happen when you least expect it.." r/k 2-2009
http://members.tripod.com/Ron_Kinard