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"just maybe.."

Posted November 19th, 2009 by fallen_butterfly

if only you could
dare dive in the misty pools
of my eyes

if only you could
trespass to the portals
of my mind

if only you could
hear the throbbing
of my heart

then maybe,
just maybe,
you'll know,

that if you would just take my hand...
I'll finally be
home at last..

..just maybe..

Nice read... :)

On November 19th, 2009 USI says:

I felt the longing and the innocence in your piece.
I really enjoyed your word choices and construction also.
Simple and emotive!
This is very nice Aizai!
Eric

:)..thanks...

On November 19th, 2009 fallen_butterfly says:

You always make me smile with your kind comments..
Thank you for appreciating this one..
these words, this poem..i wish i could just say it out loud.
oh well, i'm gettin mushy here..lol.
thanks and much more hugs Eric!!

"If you cannot be a poet, be the poem."
David Carradine
Actor, Director

_aizai03_

To Find Courage in the Ability to Love

On November 23rd, 2009 eternal_optimist says:

It is hard when you long for something so badly, to wish so hard for something. It takes courage to to write and courage to say, but the greatest courage is found in being able to love like this. So honest and well expressed.

Jill

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