Pale Lavender (Skeleton)
Pink and red to touch:
Petals of human innocence.
Brushed tint of blue,
Deep, and swallowing my ardency for you.
Pale lavender all the days of my life,
experiences a canvas of the unforeseen.
Impressions of you remain,
despondent defeat of utopia.
Just a skeleton version I had an idea for and wanted to throw out there.
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despondent defeat of utopia.
is an awesome line. Great use of color, too, in reflecting on a past love. Touching, real, and definitely a tight meter also.