You Don't Know

you don't know what has happened
to me in the past six months
we haven't spoken
we haven't written
we have merely grown apart
you say your busy
you say you'll call
but you never do
so i'll believe it when it happens
i won't depend on you
so when you call
hope it isn't soon
i won't answer
because i am mad
and it doesn't matter
if you don't care
or if you do
because i'll still be mad at you
i hate you
i love you
i don't know you
i don't care
if you don't call
because i am over you

this was written in thirty seconds so don't bug me about grammar

your really good at writting

your really good at writting

thanks

aww thanks

your new buddy,
Dreams of Beaches

I know the feeling...

I had to laugh at your last line tho, I will not "bug" you about your grammar (besides mine is worse)... But the 30 second comment made me think... the best writes I feel like I have had are the emotionally charge ones.... and it usually take me about thirty seconds, I enjoyed this one, and if your down, keep your head up-Lee

thanks

head is up and there is no looking back... people just really annoy me sometimes.

i'm glad you enjoyed it,
Dreams of Beaches

For what it's worth, I

For what it's worth, I didn't see any grammatical errors. And yes, like Lee I think some of the best ones are written quick and with emotion. This one fits that mold. Nice poem.

thanks

i think that what lee said is true too. thank you for the comment

Dreams of Beaches

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