Smoking

If I could pull it off like Audrey Hepburn
I'd probably smoke. It has to be Audrey,
not Katharine--no candid no-nonsense
puffs for me, but the sultry pose
men reel to light. I mime poise

in black flats and pearls, elbow
hipbalanced and wrist tipped back
as smoke wisps upward. I'd choke
if I inhaled the thing, hack
ingénue that I am, so better
to hold it off to the side
and smile, defenseless

as my bra strap slips
off my shoulder.

December 2002

Audrey Hepburn, smokin'

I like the image(ery). I think I'll read it again, more slowly.

Thanks, Adam. Appreciated.

Thanks, Adam. Appreciated.

WooHoo! I remember this. Of

WooHoo!
I remember this. Of course. And am glad to see it again.

Looks like I should re-enter soon to catch-up - I see my buddy, Bela, also has some new posts. We could be taking over - heh.

Thanks, Melanie.

This one has always been one of my favorites even though I've never smoked. Heh. You've written some fine stuff - "Abracadabra" comes to mind - so get posting!

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