Wants fulfilled?
When you offered your body
Surprised, I wanted more?
Of course, flesh isn’t you
It’s the memories you store
In which I wish to reside
For now and ever-more
You can shower me off
I’ll vanish without a scent
Not even making a dent
In your consciousness
Only your body fulfilled
Uncaring if I came, or went
Is this all life is about?
Instant gratification
Without ramification
No silly aberration
By new life creation
No relationship wrought?
Dolan Fernandes
2008
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i love the first two
i love the first two stanzas...beautifully worded
wow
nice write dolan...an interesting perspective on this subject.
i also like how this is worded.
a gem!
Linda
Right on
great Dolan.I believe even passion requires more then just body to take it from sex to passion.I enjoy most of what you write this is one of your better ones.
Gloria
substantial
good reading. Thanks. raskin