Wants fulfilled?

When you offered your body
Surprised, I wanted more?
Of course, flesh isn’t you
It’s the memories you store
In which I wish to reside
For now and ever-more

You can shower me off
I’ll vanish without a scent
Not even making a dent
In your consciousness
Only your body fulfilled
Uncaring if I came, or went

Is this all life is about?
Instant gratification
Without ramification
No silly aberration
By new life creation
No relationship wrought?

Dolan Fernandes
2008

i love the first two

i love the first two stanzas...beautifully worded

wow

nice write dolan...an interesting perspective on this subject.
i also like how this is worded.
a gem!
Linda

Right on

great Dolan.I believe even passion requires more then just body to take it from sex to passion.I enjoy most of what you write this is one of your better ones.

Gloria

substantial

good reading. Thanks. raskin

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