Nature

the hooded falcon
appears dangerous to man
in the sky, it kills

in a desert ~
beautiful cactus flowers bloom
and blush unseen .....

postage stamp nursery
seedlings fill hectares
in God’s Own Country

Deep

I really liked this piece. The wordchoice was phenominal! "beautiful cactus flowers bloom and blush unseen ....." Wow. I love that. Great job! I'm sorry this has been so unnoticed, because it certainly does not deserve to be.

wInTeR rOsE

Thanks for noticing

The cactus flower is sometimes so minute that it is often not seen and, as such many cannot appreciate its exquisiteness. I’m glad you noticed this piece. Thank you for commenting on Luminous Eyes and Pleasure and Pain. I’m sorry you have had occasion to identify with the girl in Luminous Eyes, but all things pass and I know that joy and contentment awaits you. It’s only when we have experienced pain that we can appreciate the many pleasures life offers.

I’ve just read your poems and note the rosary of sadness that brush them and sometimes permeate them. I hope one day you’ll write something that will be a shout of joy unbounded, and I am sure that one day that poem will come and I'll have the pleasure of reading it

Peace and happiness

Dolan

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