I see you
I see you in the sea
Calm and still
Quietly beautiful
I see you in the sky
Brilliant blue
Blindingly beautiful
I see you in the river
Rushing madly
Tempestuously beautiful
I see you in the rain
Falling lightly
Liquidly beautiful
I see you on the mountain
Reaching skywards
Unattainably beautiful
I see you in my dreams
Alone, searching
Ethereally beautiful
I see you in many forms
Earthly and celestial
Will I ever see you?
Dolan Fernandes
2008
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Dolan
Dreams...right? they can be beautiful, and magical. ...can't they Dolan?
a sweet poem with nice visuals
i like it alot
Linda
AWESOME
This piece is so beautiful.There is so much beauty out there that nobody sees.In people and in places.Love it Dolan
Gloria
beautiful
beautiful
Thanks
It's very nice to see that you liked my work
Dolan
I See You
I really like this piece dolan, its very open to interpretation and i get a sense of spiritual warmth being sought. It is almost like a search for an angel? Love the comparrisons to nature;beauty is in all things earthly i feel, and the ending line is wistful, and poignant-'Will I ever see you?/Meet you?/Know you?
Take care
DEbs
Our search
Debs,
Thank you for your comment. Indeed the words are open to interpretation, but as you said, it is essentially a search for someone may not exist.
Dolan