Half of One

Not sure for what I was looking
And in fear of what I’d find
Hesitatingly I entered
The periphery of your mind

I needed to know much more
Of your sorrows and joys
Learning every day as I explored
Your feelings, given voice

I have no reason to be here
Feeling a common voyeur
But I won’t leave as I want to hear
Your heart beat, loud and clear

I’m not sure you’ll let me stay
For a while longer to know
Of the men you let in,
And of the ones you keep away

No flight plans were prepared or filed
No permission for an emergency land
Flying blind with no navigational aid
I landed uninvited and here I stand

Will your heart to consider?
If you wish me to stay or retreat
If I stay we will know whether
We make each other complete.

Dolan Fernandes
2008

good stuff

I like this dolan.It makes a person feel good reading it.

Gloria

ditto

that one, well said. raskin

i agree, this is well said

i agree, this is well said and feels right

One or two?

Thank you all for your comments.

Dolan

hey Dolan...another great

hey Dolan...another great one

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