Don’t Give Up On Love
Why do some live their lives alone?
No love equals its loss not to mourn
Or is the reason they remain forlorn
Believing they will find hearts of stone
Put yourselves out, you may feel some pain
There’s something to lose much more to gain
Let your heart’s song be love’s refrain
Give of your love, more of it will remain
For everyone - there’s someone for you
One you know, perhaps someone new
Once you adapt to this different view
Dreams you believe in will come true
Its laughter and sadness, its ecstasy
It will happen to you, believe in me
Not holding you down it sets you free
The state of love is the best one to be
Love’s been around a long, long time
In prosaic prose, free verse or rhyme
Dishes need basil, rosemary or thyme
Life needs love, it makes human divine
Dolan Fernandes
2008
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lovely thoughts ,Dolan
lovely thoughts ,Dolan
Thank you
Thank you Mimi. Glad you liked the content.
Dolan
great rhyme
dolan, loved the content and also the addition of herbs at the end. I love to cook so this speaks to me. Thanks for the lift. raskin
Parsley, sage, rosemary and thyme
Thanks Raskin. After all the way to a (wo)man’s heart is through her/his stomach.
Basil and other herbs are equally important.
Happy cooking
Dolan
flat leaf
italian parsley is my favorite to add to a spagetti sauce. raskin
LOVE
Dolan, I love this write. It's so true too! Its better to love than be alone. I also LOVE that you incorporated the herbs in at the end. So adorable!!!! And my three favorite herbs to cook with..basil, rosemary and thyme!!!
Graet writing my friend.
Linda
:):)
Thanks
Thank you Linda. I can't agree with you more. It's always nice to hear from you. I've been reading some of your recent poems and I like the new style. If your cooking is as good, you deserve at least two stars.
Cheers,
Dolan
Dolan,
I think I might be a better cook than a poet....LOL
But I love them both the same!!!
Ive been liking your poetry alot too!
Linda
:)