Crisp Breeze

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cool crispness
sprinkling through this place
wrinkling the sky
and shining on my face

littered leaves
beneath my feet
the sun is shining bright
but it's lost its heat

a breezy message
that summer will soon end
and the cold torture of night-like
winter will come again

the tropics

Not for us folks in the tropics. It's still nice and toasty down here. Like your quatrain, though. Well-written and crafted stuff, friend. Stay warm!

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