…it’s ecstasy
- ~GUY~
She exhales marijuana,
(just breathing around you makes me fly)
her lips are glossed of shrooms,
(kissing you brings me closer to the sky)
her skin laced with coke...
(biting you is like a heavenly dream)
and if you look into her eyes . . . its ecstasy.
(just looking at you makes my mind scream)
- ~GIRL~
I exhale marijuana,
(i've got what it takes to make you high)
my lips are glossed of shrooms,
(when we kiss, you'll never want to say "goodbye")
my skin is laced with coke
(bite me, this is where you want to be)
and if you look into my eyes . . . its ecstasy.
(i'll blow your mind with what's within me)
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Great Write!
I love your writing style; heaps of expression in this one, and enjoying the rest of your poetry aswell.
Debs
Thank you!
I'm glad you enjoy/ed my poems. There are more to come! Feel free to comment/criticize; I welcome them :) Catch you around, Debs. Have a nice day!
~If you look up into the sky for long your stuff will get stolen~
what a good poem
how could you write it? I really like your poem and your writing-style can describe it clearly. Excellent, you`re really different..
~ november Lilly ~
Thank you,
This was a conversation with a friend online. We were comparing substance feelings with girls... and my friend is a girl =p
~If you look up into the sky for long your stuff will get stolen~