The Day He Told Me

The room was stark and white
Coffee aroma pervaded the air
I knew he had bad news to tell
As I sunk into the chair

Words tumbled from his mouth
Time seemed to slow right down
Even the air ceased to move
Oh God ! I’m going to drown

He didn’t smile when he shook my hand
As we stood by the door
I couldn’t look him in the eye
Just kept staring at the floor

Like a zombie I left the hospital
I really didn’t want to cry
I wanted to scream and shout aloud
“Can anyone tell me why?”

The tears are less as time has passed
And every day more strength I find
Too live my life the best I can
Now I know I’m going blind

sarah

that is painfully beautiful...

a loss

A great poem of loss,your body and mind go numb but deep inside you know life has to carry on.
;o) xx

m weedon xx :o)

Tragic Write

This piece is a captivating, found myself wanting to know what was being told to you..........and then the last line....shocking.
Well written, sad piece,
Dave

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