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On Reflection

Posted July 2nd, 2008 by delicategirl

"You're going to fail like times before"

I heard my reflection say.

"I don't listen to you anymore"

And with that she went away.

nice

On July 2nd, 2008 mimi says:

nice

Thank you Mimi for taking

On July 2nd, 2008 delicategirl says:

Thank you Mimi for taking the time to leave a comment, tis much appreciated :o)

Sarah -xXx-

Your 'reflection'

On July 2nd, 2008 Lamebull says:

I enjoyed this very to-the-point little diddy! (I too have stopped paying attention:)

Nice minimalistic write!

On July 2nd, 2008 tj says:

It's not easy to pull one off, but you did it nicely. I
like the message contained in this piece.
We are always doubting ourselves and our abilities. Best to push those doubts aside and forge ahead with confidence. Good message and well-written.

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