LOSS
Can you hear me calling?
Grasping through the air
Do you know I am near you?
Even though you are not there.
Do you see me searching?
Looking for a sign
That you are out there somewhere
And peace I can find
Can you hear my weeping?
Hoping pain will bring you here
I know you are forever lost
But I must keep you near.
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Loss
Haunting and lonely write. Pain and sadness in each line.
Loss is an apt title.
Good write,
Dave
Love is Everlasting
This is so sad...it is powerful and emotionally honest. Excellent structure and the rhyme is unforced. I have lost many people close to me, the space they leave is never filled...but in time you will be whole again. We keep them alive through our memories...just because someone dies doesn't mean that our love for them dies also. Real love is everlasting.
Jill