Her Face
I saw her face in the crowd.
Such elegant beauty.
But it was her brown eyes
Slumped deep within their sockets
That shouted the loudest too me.
And as she passed by
I knew she was drowning
In a constant sadness.
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this was great....
I experienced that once....it's amazing how you can read someones eyes, I love the imagery used and the line...drowning in a constant sadness....great...peace
I'm glad you liked it and
I'm glad you liked it and thankyou for taking the time too say so :o)
The eyes always tell the truth I think.
Love On Ya
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i really liked this poem it
i really liked this poem it reminds me of a woman i once knew so i can relate to it.