Stalking Shadows

everything goes wrong in ways that no one wants to say

all the color runs away and everything is gray

the shadows stalk you all day long they never leave your side

even in the shadows there is nowhere to hide

the blood still runs and the tears still form

in the darkest hours of the storm

the depths of the darkness will comfort no longer

but it will make you stronger

this is beautiful; it has

this is beautiful; it has excellent rhythm and simple yet very delicately formed words and imagery. wow, a 10 and a Gold Star! :)) ♥ WAY TO GO!

Admiration

Your poetry is truly amazing. I admire your talent and concept.

Admiration

Your poetry is truly amazing. I admire your talent and concept.

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