Scars
Suffered in life
Heal and mostly disappear
From sight…
Of both body and mind
Are permanent reminders
That ne’er see light
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hopefully an endless variety and types. Aim is to arouse emotions of any and all nature, and if I do, then I'm doing something right. Simple poems and simple rhymes are all that I can do. Have very little formal education, having worked with my hands and not my mind most of my life. I was forced to write some poetry for an on-line writing class and got hooked on it as a fun hobby. I have nothing published and probably nothing worth publishing except for an E-book on Poemhunter.com. I write for myself, first and foremost, but like most, enjoy it when someone else can find some interest in what I write. I have 601 poems posted as of 4/26/2013. (and two or three are good!). I see poems as puzzles to solve.
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The scars indeed are the
The scars indeed
are the bars i read
on the cell of a hell
call a memories seed
it holds us
it binds us
so we hide
...till it finds us
Hells bells Ron...
David o Whalen your comments are better than my poetry!!
Speaking from Experience
This is so very true, and a remarkable piece of profound poetry as well. I can really relate to this, David, and am in awe of your skill with the pen. It also reminded me of a movie called, "Sleepers" - an amazing true story (by Lorenzo Carcaterra) of four boys in Hell's Kitchen, New York, growing up in the 60's. They experience some very tough times, leaving deep mental scars which are only exposed years later when an opportunity for revenge presents itself. Of course, for most of us, that opportunity never arises, or is avoided when it does, but the point is that we all live with internal scars from various experiences in our life. It changes the way we feel, the way we see things, the way we live. This poem is short and (bitter-)sweet. I think it's awesome. Best regards,
Chris