Makes one wonder
Christ died, and then came
Back you see…soooo, Jesus was
Really a zombie?
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Christ died, and then came
Back you see…soooo, Jesus was
Really a zombie?
hopefully an endless variety and types. Aim is to arouse emotions of any and all nature, and if I do, then I'm doing something right. Simple poems and simple rhymes are all that I can do. Have very little formal education, having worked with my hands and not my mind most of my life. I was forced to write some poetry for an on-line writing class and got hooked on it as a fun hobby. I have nothing published and probably nothing worth publishing. I write for myself, first and foremost, but like most, enjoy it when someone else can find some interest in what I write.
Read classic poems from:
No other conclusion
is possible.
Good one!
Great minds think alike..
David o Whalen and you, Raggin, and I are some weird dudes! Thanks for taking my irreverent write in the harmless manner intended.
Great Poem, David!
David,
Never in my wildest sick, insane imagination would I ever have thought to so obviously spoof Jesus in this way. Absolutely brilliant!
And giving the poetry due consideration, the first 1 1/2 lines are very somber, appropriate for death. But the remainder is quick and upbeat, carrying us helplessly along to the absurd, surprising, humorous twist of a conclusion!
I really liked this one.
raggindragon
Thanks for...
David o Whalen The reassurance Rag! I thought i might have stepped over the "in bad taste line" with this little ditty, but haven't been smitten with a bolt of lightning yet, so if there's a God...she's got a sense of humour!
Makes one wonder
Zombie of Love.....